rated rs rap battle vote

In ring segment

camera fades in

Rebecca Great :I have been given the honor to introduce and show you the future rated rs

crowed cheers loudly

Nino and rated rs show up

Chris Kayoz: This the best thing that happened to FFI

Nino and rated rs walk into the ring

Don Jackson:I have to give it to the kid, he has some talent

Rated rs holds the mic up to his mouth

rated rs: Well the greatest ever has arrived

crowd cheers

Nino takes the mic

Nino: As rated rs manger and girlfriend. On his behalf I would like to say welcome to the rated rs rap battle

crowed cheers louder then ever

Chris Kayoz: Yes a rap battle

Don Jackson: Well what a way to start off his career here in FFI

Nino heads to sit in her chair

Rated rs: rules simple wrestler's rap back and fourth the winner will be decided by your vote at the end of the night , got the rules well then here i go right here i go

crowed cheers

rated rs: you think you all know me
i hope you enjoy your sweet tea
i feel like a kid going straight to the big league
when they know that you what it takes to succeed
that's when your idols
become your rivals
that when you got to team up with bigs for your survival
i swear that music and sports are the same
we want to be then they want to be us
rappers that are gangster hit me up and down
i don't know what to tell them
they think i can take them from they fell from
this is just the beginning
their a lot more to come from
what a year for you fighters

no need to thank me now
you can thank me later
it really doesn't matter
because i’m the greatest ever


first name greatest
middle name for
last ever,
ever
toss in the rs know you have a matter
i don't rewrite
i just restart
those other rappers anit nothing
while i'm something
i don't need rhyme zone
because i'm home
and your get blown
go head and make a clone
you will still drown
because i'm finally grown

no need to thank me now
you can thank me later
it really doesn't matter
because i'm the greatest for ever

your welcome
your welcome
this is my year
i have no fear
go ahead and cheer
you're be lucky if you don't meet the R Spear


no need to thank me now
you can thank me later
it really doesn't matter
because i'm the greatest for ever


i'm gonna cut this short
because i'm getting kinda boarded
but a shout out to my city
even if i'm almost never home
i take pride in what i do
and i give it my all

Chris Kayoz: Well that was good

Don Jackson: Your right about that i think we have a winner

crowed chants Rated

Daitezen comes out

Don Jackson: Now this definitely isn’t someone we thought would come out here for a rap battle.

Chris Kayoz: Though with that insane expression on his face, who knows what he has in mind.

Daitezen stands still at the entrance, microphone in hand, smiling to himself. His theme music subsides into the quiet playing of violins, as he lifts the microphone to his mouth.

Daitezen:

You really don’t need to conform to type
To throw together some words without the hype
Of unnecessary showmanship, I show this
One time design to rhyme and blow this
Off the stage, a spot lit serenade
Words detonating like live grenades
A verbose cascade, different form, same substance
An intense propensity in abundance
To the typically lyrically diverse synchronicity
Simplicity of background provides verbal authenticity
Words thundering through you like electricity
And this is just for starters, no games, no duplicity.

Pyros begin to burn at either side of the entrance, as the lights fade to darkness, leaving Daitezen’s silhouette lit deep red.

Daitezen:

I take this higher than my funeral pyre
Aspire to heights you couldn’t comprehend
Apprehending others soon discover limits
Exhibit a display of pain beyond end
It’s insane, I can’t pretend to explain
The discordant dystopic distorted delusion
Some collusion, a poetic rap fusion
The intrusion of thoughts. Psychotic?
A myopic vision, the decisions hypnotic
Vines wrap and constrict
You’re trapped don’t resist
In the words of a masochist
Beyond insanity, the only reason to exist
is
this.

Daitezen raises his hands into the air, the pyros burn brighter, and spotlights light the entrance. A torrent of ‘blood’ falls down from the roof, coating Daitezen and the entrance to the arena. The pyros reflect in Daitezen’s eyes, a crazed expression across his face. The lights cut out, and the pyros stop. The normal lighting returns, and Daitezen has gone, leaving nothing but a pool of ‘blood’ in his wake.


Rated rs looks surprised

Rated rs: Where did he go?

Don Jackson: Well that is Daitezen style

Chris Kayoz: Well I think he's gonna get some more fans now

rated rs: Well that is something you don't see everyday but is wait this is the only guy who showed up?

Chris Kayoz: Yes rated

rated rs: thanks then so here i go again

take your high vocab
and ity's
out the front door
no need for you no more
i never lost a rap battle
no way i'm gonna lose to this blood lover
Miss heart your acting like Nino
and we all know
why do girls waste time trying to find Nemo
and the guy i'm dissing is emo
i turn dislike
to dis i like
all you haters join the hate club, club
because i had enough
and i just begin ... don't think i'm done,
i told you yeah i told you rizzy anti nothing nice
bracelets telling you to quite
card saying you messed your life
everyone telling me to
look at this guy with long hair
but i'm the one you should beware

Crowed chants owned


Don Jackson: It looks like Rated will win this

Chris Kayoz: Of course he is rated rs was a hip hop star


crowd chants "We Want more, We Want More"

Chris Kayoz: We have a special guest joining us at ring side Nino

rated rs is getting a drink of water from his water bottle

Don Jackson:Thanks for joining us at ring side. So miss Nino who do you think is gonna win this rap battle

Nino looks surprised

Chris Kayoz: I think he he means who is going to win this rap battle

Nino: Rated of course. He was a rapper before this.

Rated rs picks up the mic again

Chris Kayoz: well it looks like rated rs is gonna rap again

Rated rs:
my mix tape sound like album
a nation wide tour was the out come
i went to Hollywood for all the money
i came back with nothing
i been there i have done
i'm super star posing as rookie
i take my raps serous
i know you hate me
so join the hate club
and go ahead sweep up


we don't play the game
the game plays us
we want to be them
they want be us

take from a killer
you anti no legend
until you kills
use you power of will
i know you all afraid
that's why you anti coming
i dis you up
and make your ten year old fans cry
your movies suck
that's why they put them on those cd's and shelf them up



As Rated RS wraps up his verse, "Beast Mode" by B.O.B. begins to play & Big Murphcomes out in his Cardinal Red Lamborghini Diablo, grabs a mic & steps into the ring...

*

Chris Kayoz: It looks like Big Murph wants in on this battle! This should be interesting; a 3-way rap battle!

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Don Jackson: We all know how much passionate Murph is about hip hop, and just to be clear, he's NOT a rapper, he's just a fan. Let's what transpires...

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Big Murph: Ok, this is pretty interesting; Daitezen, wherever you went to, what up, &, Rated RS, you don't know me obivously, but I'm Big Murph. Before you get any ideas, I just came out to welcome you to FFI and to see if you wanted to join my stable, FFI: MPR. I could use a guy of your caliber and skill. What do you say?

Chris Kayoz: What a turn of events Big Murph isn't here to rap he is here to recite

Don jackson: lets see what happens

Nino gets up from her seat

Nino walks into the ring

Nino: As rated rs's manger i accept, but your gonna have to rap and rated rs is going to start first

rated rs: Look at this fool
he knows he is gonna get schooled
that's why he needs me and he knows i'm cool
you could make me leave but i come right back
and i don't like to lose a match
he's trying to be a gangster
i'm gonna be the season two prankster
I have done this before it ended with me losing the championship
this man right here got the hop but not the hip


Crowd: OOOHHHH! SCHOOLED!

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Chris Kayoz: Don, Rated RS just served Big Murph! Murph, whether you like or not, you gotta prove yourself here in FFI's Hip Hop Shop!

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Don Jackson: Shhhh, Chris, let's see how he does; he might just surprise us all...

Nino leaves the ring and sits back down

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Big Murph: Ok ok ok. I ain't never done this before, but here goes:

You say you were a rapper, so why'd you stop?
Oh, I get it, you couldn't even go pop
Every line or verse was a flop
Hell, bruh, did you even have an album drop?

My 16's mean
like that cat Joe Green
I stay clean
like a fresh pair of jeans
Put in work without knives or guns
I do this for fun
Make all my enemies run
My star shines brighter than the sun

I've battled some of the best
Dat Kid from the Midwest
Layin' my competition to rest
Dawg, this ain't no battle rap
Son, go take a nap
Here, let me put you 2 bed
That's a good boy, rest yo lil head
Close yo lil eyes
and stop frontin' with dem lies

You say I'M da fool that just got schooled?
I just applied pressure like a tool
Never 4get,Big Murph rules

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Don Jackson: Oh, snap! Murph, put it on em! He's right, his 16's ARE mean!

*

Crowd: GO, BIG MURPH, GO! GO, BIG MURPH, GO! GO, BIG MURPH, GO!

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Chris Kayoz: DAAAAMMMMNNNN! Murph flexed on em! What will be his response, and for that matter, is it eenough for Rated RS to join the stable?[/quote]

crowd cheers

rated rs: well that was well done my friend i hope you like this

underrated
underestimated
everyone who's doubt me is asking for forgiveness
i'm killing all these others rappers you could swear i have a hit lists
you could make all the legends you want i'll keep killing them
my million dollar album just dropped
unlike your career i'm no flop
and for matter of fact every legend here i will pop

crowd cheers louder then every before

rated rs:
what star you talking about the one i just bought
you call your self mean
but the last time i checked people said you were a queen
i don't need any guns
put me against any one and i still won't run
i don't to need anyone
to win

Chris Kayoz: this is rated rs's show no way you taking it

Don Jackson: Yes your finally right about some thing this is like rated rs's play ground

Chris Kayoz: this is rated's thing man

rated rs:
you think i'm done
well i just begin
from your stats it has you have zero wins
don't act like the hero because i'm the one who pins
your gonna be laying on the ground when my two fins
hit .. if you face me i'm the one who skins
i'm the one that is know as the brown king
your too afraid to fight me in the ring
go ahead and spread your wings
and fly away

you have done well
but time to go
you anti the ruler
because i'm the real king

Chris Kayoz: come on rated. He just set the bar higher

Don Jackson: Two rights in a day. Well that is a new record for you

Nino grads a mic

Nino: well any one else out there that wants to come out and rap?

waits five minutes

rated rs: i respective these guys for coming out and trying rest of you have to still earn. But there is one man i want to see come out more than anyone


Lose Yourself by Eminem plays, as the crowd wonders who this is a blue hooded figure with a mic stands in a shower of sparks. He makes his way to the ring*

Hooded Figure : You know I hear yall out here rapping, but check this

Hooded Figure :
Yall out here rapping like you got skill, lets make it known I kill

listen here now ima beat you like a pizza batter,

it just don't matter,

you trying to act hard with these week lyrics u spit,

you try to diss me but that's all you come up with,

man i bet you dont even rep ur hood,

trying to come at me...homie I wish you would,

you sitting over there actin all tough,

you ain't even got one hit,

imma rip you apart bit by bit,

you say i don't want no beef,

man forget that imma leave you in best believe,

cause this right here ain't no game,

your style sounds all the same,

like a hillbilly trying to work a crane,

all I hear is mistake after mistake,

maybe you should hang it up and take a break,

homie you can't even keep a beat,

your flow is wack and mine is concrete,

come on and come at me with your weak little
rhymes,

if ive told u once I told you a thousand times,

i'm the this when it comes to the lyrics I spit,

im the dopest and this and its time to admit,

trying to tell me get my game up,

homie please...your a screw up,

I don't need you coming at me like this,

next time you do imma knock you back into an abyss,

*The hooden figure reveals himself to be Showtime Jernigan*

Showtime : Ha, yall got nothing on me


rated rs: your came to the wrong place this is the rated rs rap battle not i'm gonna use rhyme rap battle

No one likes me because i have done things no one else before
been to places no other guy been before
put the man on the moon
i'll be the first one to walk the sun

i already told you before i kill rappers
turn them tappers
i am no tech but i'm the greatest trapper

we the young spite it all and rap fair
no way you coming any where near

i anti from the hood
but i'm still doing good
i'll cut you like a piece of wood
i hope you under stood

when i hit i just kill
no way i'm gonna show my true skill
if you don't believe me go ask Will

yeah i don't beef
because i only eat meat
see this big army i'm the commander in chief
right now your acting like thief

your the big mistake
you act rich but it's all fake
your acting like snake
from these lines you could give or take

your the one who stole that concrete
all you are is a little cheat
leave this place and take a treat
and take the back seat
next time make sure to delete
me, because boy you won't survive on the main street

your gonna kick me to abyss
you know my boy bigs
told me to give you this

rated rs punches Showtime Jernigan

Nino stands up and starts clapping

Nino: That is my rated

Don Jackson: That was a cheap shot by rated

Chris kayoz: Show made rated mad that why he did

Don Jackson: Show is getting back up



*Showtime Jernigan gets to his feet*

Showtime : Know on me and the reaper on a first name basis now
I'm a let you make it now, stay totally out the way for you
But know that we can take it any place you wanna take it to
Hatin' in your blood cuh guess it's just too late for you
All I could do is pray for you or organize a wake for you
Your choice, clearly I ain't hearing your voice
Imma roll out in my Roll Royce
I told you once before I kill
and I told you once you got no skill
feel free to hate because Imma let you haters have it
You gonna cry when I'm done
Here lil boy let me get you an ice cream cone
That feel better? Good I'm tired of rapping
You're boy told you to give me this

*Showtime Jernigan punches rated rs in the face*

Chris Kayoz: He hit that pretty face

Don Jackson: Rated deserves that

Nino: poor rated

Let me tell you my boy reaper told me to give you this

*Showtime Jernigan climbs out of the ring, grabs a sledge hammer and smashes it into rates rs's chest*

Nino Screams

Showtime Jernigan: They say your lattitude determines your attitude
You on the floor put that down as a score for me

1 2 3 AND TO THE 4

Im Gettin Ready To Destroy The Industry's Status Quo

Im Lyrically And Empircally Gifted,

Imma Suprize Yall Like When OJ Got Acquitted,

When I Battle People Its Just Unfair,

I Hold It Down And Yall Are Unaware,

I Put More Damage On The Mic That Game Does With 50,

All My Raps Are Real And Thats No Mystery,

I Would Keep Going With The Rap And Make You Look Even Worse,

But I Really Don't Feel Like Calling In A Nurse

Rated gets back up

rated and show stare at each other

they shake hands

and show walks back stage

Don Jackson: what was that?

Chris kayoz: it was faked

rated rs: Yes Mr. smartypants it was faked now give i big hand for my friend show

crowd claps

someone throws a fake hand

rated rs: very funny now guys it up to you to decided the winner of this rap battle

camera fades

one vote

cancelling allowed

the rated rs rap battle is closed rated rs is your winner

aug 28 2011
the polls ended

If my rap was there I Could have won

sand i'm using your rap for something better