emorters Final impact rp

Emorter Makes His way to the ring

Chris Kayoz: Here Comes a Fan Favourite

Don Jackson: Who would be a fan of a loser?


Emorter asks for a mic

*fans cheer*

Emorter: this is the big show

Emorter: it sorta feels like home

Emorter: im hoping to win my first match after Getting a destructive west coast pop Felt more like death coast pop

*fans laugh at the not funny joke*

Emorter: well enough with my loss ill tell you a bit about me

Emorter: I'm a Fan of San Jose Sharks

Emorter: Antti Niemi Is the best

*fans boo*

*emorter climbs out*

Emorter: Really?

*Emorter grabs a fan and pulls him towards me*

Emorter: Hey what team do you like

fan: edmonton oilers

Emorter: TH THEE OILERS?

Fan: yes

emorter: dude they suck
*Tosses the fan*

*Fans boo louder*

Chris Kayoz: well looks like this guys turned evil

Don Jackson: you could say that again chris

Emorter: shut up u all suck!

Fans : BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

*emorter leaves the ring*

*cam fades*

1 Word Fail xD ot realy, Weird heel turn though, lol

its good enough XD

Colour and check your spelling

kk tom

Not a good Heel Turn.

Improvement:

Instead of doing this,

Emorter: well enough with my loss ill tell you a bit about me

Emorter: I'm a Fan of San Jose Sharks

Emorter: Antti Niemi Is the best

You should put the writing altogether, like this:

Emorter: Well enough with my loss, I'll tell you a bit about me. I'm a Fan of San Jose Sharks. Antti Niemi Is the best!

P.S. Use Commas and Spell Check your work.

Your other RP was much better than this. Common, You can produce better RPs than this.